You know, DUmmie reflection--I assume you are lurking here--the first rule of satire, whether from the left or from the right, is that it has to be funny. Yours comes up woefully short in that respect. And the second rule, when dealing with song parodies in particular, is that you have to craft the parody with attention to detail--rhyme, meter, the words and syllables, etc.--matching your parody to the original. There is a certain craft to writing good parodies. You evidently have not learned that craft.
I, Charles Henrickson, the wag tailoring the doggerel, have written reams of satire over the years, including a plethora of parodies--btw, mostly at the expense of DUmmies like you. And for the most part, my parodies have been well received. You see, I make sure my stuff is actually funny before I post it (Rule One), and I pay attention to the details of the literary craft (Rule Two).
Now if you would like some lessons in how to do parodies, I could assist you. But be warned, I am a capitalist, and I would charge you for my tutelage.
Until then, DUmmie reflection, you might consider leaving this art form to people who actually know how to do it.
