freshwest (20,464 posts) Fri Oct 19, 2012, 09:40 PM
5. Your use of pronouns was incorrect throughout. No offense, but:
Okay, President Obama is a liar
That was first person and you could have gone further to explain why he is, or isn't, but you didn't.
Somebody failed Freshman English, apparently, or perhaps just writes as poorly as the OP. It starts in the
second person, talking about Obama, then shifts rather confusingly to the first person, creating no end of mischief with the intended meaning since it is not clear whether the poster is actually speaking as himself, or as President Obama.