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Offline Alpha Mare

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Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« on: July 04, 2010, 07:10:15 AM »
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My very first serious poem, be gentle. 
 The ______ States of America



It's the birthday of our nation and once again
we blow stuff up. We cook out and drink
to celebrate the amazing fact that we remain
but how many times have we ever stopped to think ...

...You conservative people who think yourselves so righteous
No longer have the rights to the word united
Your entire plan to save the country is to fight us
and cheer when our cities become broken and blighted.

Greed and selfishness and derision are the new American pride.
The poor and jobless the new terrible inhuman foe.
The new patriotism is little more than a partisan divide
Where the only a thing a leader has to do is say no.

It's too long and  :yawn: to bring over.
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #1 on: July 04, 2010, 07:14:41 AM »
This doesn't even deserve to be made fun of. It sucks that badly.
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #2 on: July 04, 2010, 07:18:06 AM »
Quote from: Alpha Mare on July 04, 2010, 07:10:15 AM
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 It's too long stooooopid and  :hammer: to bring over.

So god bless America this 4th of July, I think we are going to see
This land of milk and honey, this democratic example,
This America the Beautiful, was sold for a nominal fee,
To a corporate machine who knows only how to trample.

I think we have already been sold to the Chinese and Japanese, for the measly sum of $13 trillion dollars....

A bargain at twice the price! 
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #3 on: July 04, 2010, 07:18:15 AM »
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You conservative people who think yourselves so righteous
No longer have the rights to the word united
Your entire plan to save the country is to fight us
and cheer when our cities become broken and blighted.

This person and his/her poem are idiotic.

Just an FYI fool

I'm having my coffee
and browsing my computer
when I look to the right
what a sight I see
prominently on my refrigerator
is a beautiful magnetic sign that says

"America was founded by RIGHT WING EXTREMISTS"

If you can not see the greatness
of what our Country was founded on
and the greatness that has and still does exist
then you can take your
latte
your poems
your art
your organic veggies
and your silly naive views
and book a flight to Venezuela
then get back to us
OK?


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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #4 on: July 04, 2010, 07:28:00 AM »
Don't give up the carpentry, dipshit.  Though I gather from your previous posts that you suck at earning a living through carpentry about as much as you suck at poetry.
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #5 on: July 04, 2010, 07:31:54 AM »
Quote from: miskie on July 04, 2010, 07:14:41 AM
This doesn't even deserve to be made fun of. It sucks that badly.

Whole new level of suckitude.
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2010, 08:22:11 AM »
Quote from: blitzkrieg_17 on July 04, 2010, 07:31:54 AM
Whole new level of suckitude.

Calpig level of suck? or worse? :o
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #7 on: July 04, 2010, 11:32:52 AM »
Quote from: lars1701c on July 04, 2010, 08:22:11 AM
Calpig level of suck? or worse? :o

No. Calpig's suck is The Quintessential Suck. It's the suck standard that all other sucks are measured by. Remember the scene in Goldfinger when Gert Frobe is sucked out the airplane window? Her poems suck worse than that. The final tornado scene in Twister? Worse than the tornado. Any scene in Deep Throat? More profound suckage. Black Holes have been known to look at Calpig's poems and exclaim, "That sucks!"
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #8 on: July 04, 2010, 12:01:35 PM »
Only American corporate technology with VRWC ASSistance could develop the compression algorithms to pack so much bullshit in a single post.
Rest ASSured this DUmmy stole that tripe from somewhere.

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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #9 on: July 04, 2010, 02:37:38 PM »
Ah, yet another "PeloNazi artist"! If it were up to her, he would never have to work again and we get to pay for his healthcare!

Boy, don't that sound like the best idea to ever come out of DC?

Pardon me, I have to go shovel some of this outa the barn!
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #10 on: July 04, 2010, 05:47:49 PM »
My, how very trite and predictable. Just made the same bullshit they spew everyday rhyme. Even Utne reader wouldn't want this crap.

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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #11 on: July 05, 2010, 06:40:55 AM »
Quote from: delilahmused on July 04, 2010, 05:47:49 PM
My, how very trite and predictable. Just made the same bullshit they spew everyday rhyme. Even Utne reader wouldn't want this crap.

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Kinda like death and taxes.  And if Utne Reader wouldn't want this fecal matter in print, you know it's bad . . .
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Re: Oh He**- Another "Poet"
« Reply #12 on: July 05, 2010, 10:03:02 AM »
Quote from: PatriotGame on July 04, 2010, 12:01:35 PM
Only American corporate technology with VRWC ASSistance could develop the compression algorithms to pack so much bullshit in a single post.
Rest ASSured this DUmmy stole that tripe from somewhere.

The ONLY thing wrong with this nation is liberals.

So true. There are many limbs that stretch over, and blight the country, but hey: Cut off the head, and the animal dies. No matter how big.
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