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Nance, the indiscriminate use of the word "****" a million times is very unattractive, immature writing, especially from a woman as old as you.
That could aptly be said of a woman or man of pretty much any age.
(V)ery unattractive," you're rather kind. I'd just say "ugly".
"(I)mmature writing," again, rather kind. "Inarticulate" would be my choice of wording.
I'm not criticizing your comments. You're always kind,

, and I'm less so,

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