There's too many micro aggression triggers or whatever they're called in the first paragraph. Can't say "down on his knees," or talk about him picking up scraps. And a huge no no was using "rhythm" and "dance" to describe his actions, or even using those words in general. And if the murder she's talking about was black on black crime, you can't talk about that either. You're not allowed to care about or point out people who do things right, only people who've had wrongs done to them....and knowing is half the battle.............(GI Joe)