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Offline thundley4

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A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« on: June 23, 2010, 10:38:22 PM »
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CaliforniaPeggy   (1000+ posts)             Wed Jun-23-10 01:59 AM
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Very new poem: The Promise   
   
translucent orange
glowing across
the room I saw
salt rimmed
glass
in her
hand

full
browned softness

gathered across her
breasts showing
her life
freely given

hands float above the
glass
the sunset glows
inside
the salt rim

he watches her give

the
promise
freely



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Capn Sunshine   (1000+ posts)           Wed Jun-23-10 02:01 AM
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1. I love how your poems conjure up an image from a scene somewhere
   
Edited on Wed Jun-23-10 02:03 AM by Capn Sunshine
Nicely notated , Peg.

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2. My dear Capn Sunshine!   
   
Thank you...

I am nothing if not visual...
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #1 on: June 23, 2010, 10:43:35 PM »
That was ridiculous.
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #2 on: June 23, 2010, 10:48:09 PM »
The Prom is..  
  
agent orange
is what they called me
toxic
foul smelling
deadly
poison
gas

Depends full
brown softness

smeared across my
breasts showing
scatological
kink and fetish

after they all
leave
I am voted Prom Queen
and King

ex-lax kicking in again

the
prom is
awesome



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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #3 on: June 23, 2010, 10:51:59 PM »
Quote from: thundley4 on June 23, 2010, 10:38:22 PM
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Seriously, wtf is this woman on cuz I want some myself.
And, why is she writing a poem from a man's point of view? :confused:
Or is she?  I don't even know wtf she is trying to convey.  Miskie's poem is much better. :cheersmate:
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #4 on: June 23, 2010, 11:20:03 PM »
Quote from: miskie on June 23, 2010, 10:48:09 PM
The Prom is..     

That was... interesting. :rofl:
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #5 on: June 24, 2010, 01:13:44 AM »
Quote from: chris_ on June 23, 2010, 11:20:03 PM
That was... interesting. :rofl:

My dear Cavers....

Another Piggy poem....

AW, HELL NO!   :banghead:  :hammer:  :ashamed:
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #6 on: June 24, 2010, 03:51:48 AM »
The poem
it sucks
just
like
a
hoover

Silver
gleaming
noisy like a jet
plane

straining to break
its earthly
bounds

oh
boy
time
for another
hit

No copywrite, feel free to use it as you see fit.  :rotf:
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #7 on: June 24, 2010, 07:33:12 AM »
Quote from: Randy on June 24, 2010, 03:51:48 AM
The poem
it sucks
just
like
a
hoover

Silver
gleaming
noisy like a jet
plane

straining to break
its earthly
bounds

oh
boy
time
for another
hit

No copywrite, feel free to use it as you see fit.  :rotf:

:lmao:

That poem absolutely stinks and the few in that thread who said they loved the poem? well if it's so good than how come it has 0 recs? and what image is it supposed to conjure up? and is a salt rimmed glass supposed to be a margarita? or does the glass salt rimmed mean something sexual?
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #8 on: June 24, 2010, 07:51:04 AM »
Quote from: Randy on June 24, 2010, 03:51:48 AM
The poem
it sucks
just
like
a
hoover

Silver
gleaming
noisy like a jet
plane

straining to break
its earthly
bounds

oh
boy
time
for another
hit

No copywrite, feel free to use it as you see fit.  :rotf:

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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #9 on: June 24, 2010, 08:55:29 AM »
Quote from: blitzkrieg_17 on June 24, 2010, 07:51:04 AM
:lmao: :lmao: H5 if we still could.

b17  . . . .

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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #10 on: June 24, 2010, 09:40:53 AM »
Quote from: Ballygrl on June 24, 2010, 07:33:12 AM
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That poem absolutely stinks and the few in that thread who said they loved the poem? well if it's so good than how come it has 0 recs? and what image is it supposed to conjure up? and is a salt rimmed glass supposed to be a margarita? or does the glass salt rimmed mean something sexual?

Yeah, it was obtuse, stupid, and indecipherable even by the standards of her so-called poetic imagery.  What the Hell was translucent orange, a window in early or late day light?  A salt-rimmed glass is pretty specific to Margaritas, but nothing else seems to relate to an actual drink and you can't tell if 'Being inside it' means a reflected image or is suppose to be some particularly horrifying stab at creating a metaphor (Epic fail either way).  And what's with the soft brown crap all over her chest?  What does that have to do with anything, or did somebody wing a chocolate cream pie at her tits?

Jeeze.  Terrible.

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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #11 on: June 24, 2010, 10:07:00 AM »
Quote from: DumbAss Tanker on June 24, 2010, 09:40:53 AM
And what's with the soft brown crap all over her chest? :mental: 

DAT, do you really want to go there? :pokingpoop:
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #12 on: June 24, 2010, 10:10:40 AM »
Roses are red violets are blue
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #13 on: June 24, 2010, 10:20:05 AM »
Quote from: JohnnyReb on June 24, 2010, 10:10:40 AM
Roses are red violets are blue
Hope to never hear from you

Commies are reds,
Mallards are ducks,
CalPig's a Commie,
And her poetry sucks!

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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #14 on: June 24, 2010, 11:12:03 AM »
Quote from: Boudicca on June 23, 2010, 10:51:59 PM
And, why is she writing a poem from a man's point of view? :confused:

Well, ........................  :rotf:
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #15 on: June 24, 2010, 11:27:28 AM »
Quote from: DumbAss Tanker on June 24, 2010, 10:20:05 AM
Commies are reds,
Mallards are ducks,
CalPig's a Commie,
And her poetry sucks!

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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #16 on: June 24, 2010, 11:36:02 AM »
Quote from: DumbAss Tanker on June 24, 2010, 09:40:53 AM
Yeah, it was obtuse, stupid, and indecipherable even by the standards of her so-called poetic imagery.  What the Hell was translucent orange, a window in early or late day light?  A salt-rimmed glass is pretty specific to Margaritas, but nothing else seems to relate to an actual drink and you can't tell if 'Being inside it' means a reflected image or is suppose to be some particularly horrifying stab at creating a metaphor (Epic fail either way).  And what's with the soft brown crap all over her chest?  What does that have to do with anything, or did somebody wing a chocolate cream pie at her tits?

Jeeze.  Terrible.

:mental: 

It must be Progressive Porn.
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #17 on: June 24, 2010, 01:07:19 PM »
This poem is about a drunk slutty chick.  She drinks margharitas all day long, and regularly sunbathes naked.  She's pretty free with her favors.  That's all there is to it.  Of course, Miskie's is better, it always is. 

I too, like the "Commies are Red" piece.  It has a nice cadence.     
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #18 on: June 24, 2010, 01:20:00 PM »
Quote from: Karin on June 24, 2010, 01:07:19 PM
I too, like the "Commies are Red" piece.  It has a nice cadence.

DAT obviously knows the meaning of "iambic pantameter." :tongue:
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #19 on: June 24, 2010, 01:24:56 PM »
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Capn Sunshine   (1000+ posts)           Wed Jun-23-10 02:01 AM
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1. I love how your poems conjure up an image from a scene somewhere
   
Edited on Wed Jun-23-10 02:03 AM by Capn Sunshine
Nicely notated , Peg.
Yea - an image like this:

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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #20 on: June 24, 2010, 01:33:58 PM »
Feel free, Randy.  It's kind of hard to top PatriotGame's literary criticism, though, I had to laugh out loud on that one!

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« Reply #21 on: June 24, 2010, 01:42:42 PM »
:lmao: at PG's pic!
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #22 on: June 24, 2010, 01:59:50 PM »
Thank You Sir, done with proper credit.  :-)
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #23 on: June 24, 2010, 05:57:51 PM »
Could she please leave the boobs out of it? My word. I am sick of her boob poems. They make me feel the need to run to the toilet and throw my guts up.
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Re: A brand new CalPiggy Poem !!!
« Reply #24 on: June 24, 2010, 06:09:21 PM »
Quote from: miskie on June 23, 2010, 10:48:09 PM
The Prom is..  
  
agent orange
is what they called me
toxic
foul smelling
deadly
poison
gas

Depends full
brown softness

smeared across my
breasts showing
scatological
kink and fetish

after they all
leave
I am voted Prom Queen
and King

ex-lax kicking in again

the
prom is
awesome



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