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Title: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: Mona Lisa on July 18, 2010, 11:46:34 AM
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perfect waves
glossy sharp high

perfect sun
cloudless blue endless
sky

perfect beach
perfect people
perfect bodies
perfect tans

perfect
everything


in the cove

the mermaid weeps
for her

lost
tail

the stony beach
cuts her
feet
over her perfect
lost

love

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Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: DefiantSix on July 18, 2010, 11:48:38 AM
blink... blink.... blink.... blink....
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: JohnnyReb on July 18, 2010, 11:54:14 AM
the mermaid weeps for her lost tail....shed a few tears over missed tail myself. :rotf:

Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: Ballygrl on July 18, 2010, 12:16:46 PM
Oh, that's not a very good poem at all.
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: Mona Lisa on July 18, 2010, 12:46:37 PM
it is perfect

perfect
perfect
perfect

little poem

sitting on
the perfect beach

staring at
the perfect feet

wishing
for what could have been

a perfect poem
try again
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: vesta111 on July 18, 2010, 05:34:37 PM
Mermaids have FEET ????
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: diesel driver on July 18, 2010, 06:24:37 PM
Oh, that's not a very good poem at all.

THAT was a POEM?   :confused:

Sheet far!  (which is "redneck" for:  "I did not know that!").... 
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: miskie on July 19, 2010, 07:06:14 AM
A new poem: Summer Pervert

a pervert waves
as children pass by

his pervert son
snuggles campers under the night
sky

pervert beaches
pervert people
pervert marches
pervert films

perverts
everywhere


at the bar

the primitive begs
to get

some
tail

everybody there
refused her.
though
she is a pervert,
nobody will "go

there"

© 2010 M.
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: BlueStateSaint on July 19, 2010, 08:37:00 AM
A new poem: Summer Pervert

a pervert waves
as children pass by

his pervert son
snuggles campers under the night
sky

pervert beaches
pervert people
pervert marches
pervert films

perverts
everywhere


at the bar

the primitive begs
to get

some
tail

everybody there
refused her.
though
she is a pervert,
nobody will "go

there"

© 2010 M.

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Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: Revolution on July 19, 2010, 08:52:54 AM
I'm beginning to think the copyright companies do it purely for the shits and giggles when it comes to the Piggy primitive.
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: DumbAss Tanker on July 19, 2010, 09:30:37 AM
I'm beginning to think the copyright companies do it purely for the shits and giggles when it comes to the Piggy primitive.

She's an even bigger idiot than I would have thought possible if she's actually paying someone to do that for her, it's extremely simple and inexpensive to do it for oneself, dealing directly with the US LOC's Copyright Office.  She is, of course, a DUmmie, and a pretentious one at that.
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: vesta111 on July 19, 2010, 09:50:55 AM
:clap: :clap: :clap:  :bow: :bow: :bow: :hi5: :hi5: :hi5:

As night falls the woman waits for her next pervert.

Counting her money and on the alert.

Here he comes now  a repeat customer, thank the Lord.

Boyfriend waiting out of sight in back room. watching to insure his money bucket is not hurt and does not get board.

Off with your clothes she yells, get down on your knees, lick my toes you dirty slave.

You have been very bad, you need to be punished to mend your ways.

Out comes a paddle or a whip, tell me you love me you pencil dick.

This time the customer does not respond, his heart has stopped leaving no one to morn.

 Holy Crap this mark is dead, woman and boyfriend look at each other filled with dread.

A knock on the door another customer arrives, boyfriend tells him you are sick and in your bed.

What to do with this customer who had a cruel fate, and brought a load of shit to their gate.

No way to get the body out of the house,
 neighbors are all over your doings as if they were a hair louse.

A plan is hatched and into the tub. a hatchet and water rub-a dub dub.

Into the glad bags go the body parts,
 no problem disposing of the bags, just leave the bags in dumpsters far apart.

True story of what happend to a man in my town.  Charges were improper disposable of a human body.    Both are out of jail now, waiting for the next Pervert.

See I can out do the DU poet as for bad writing.

HOW ABOUT, DO ANY OF YOU REMEMBER CONNIE FRANCES AND HER " lipstick ON YOUR COLLAR"?

How about " skidmarks on your skivies told a tale on you, skidmarks on your skivies tells me that you need to Poo, there's the toilet paper up there on the shelf, grow up you dirty bum and learn to wipe your self."

My first and last foray into poetry's 1968.
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: soleil on July 19, 2010, 10:27:42 AM
Retro and Xema crack me up!!!
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: Mona Lisa on July 19, 2010, 10:38:42 AM
does she realize they are poking fun at her, I wonder.
Title: Re: another perfectly perfect poem
Post by: soleil on July 19, 2010, 10:45:09 AM
does she realize they are poking fun at her, I wonder.

She may realize Retro is. Maybe. Well, maybe not  :thatsright: